- some of the statements are pretty wishy washy and uncertain - even though what you're saying is subject to change as you start to execute the concept, try to project an aura of clarity for your vision - it helps get people on board with your pitch. - The descriptions seem to align your visuals relatively close to the Rosary category - making sure these two feel distinct from one another will be very important and you should clarify that in your pitch. - Break down in detail in your keyword section why these words are important and how you plan to communicate it visually.
Hey Serene,
ReplyDeletehere's my feedback for the pitch deck so far:
- some of the statements are pretty wishy washy and uncertain - even though what you're saying is subject to change as you start to execute the concept, try to project an aura of clarity for your vision - it helps get people on board with your pitch.
- The descriptions seem to align your visuals relatively close to the Rosary category - making sure these two feel distinct from one another will be very important and you should clarify that in your pitch.
- Break down in detail in your keyword section why these words are important and how you plan to communicate it visually.