Saturday, May 15, 2021

HW_05 Serene Hu

Pitch Deck:

https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1SJO94w-SjKbziPVPA68P094hIfkT7ZLSJdpuqCxwxdY/edit?usp=sharing



1 comment:

  1. Hey Serene,

    here's my feedback for the pitch deck so far:

    - some of the statements are pretty wishy washy and uncertain - even though what you're saying is subject to change as you start to execute the concept, try to project an aura of clarity for your vision - it helps get people on board with your pitch.
    - The descriptions seem to align your visuals relatively close to the Rosary category - making sure these two feel distinct from one another will be very important and you should clarify that in your pitch.
    - Break down in detail in your keyword section why these words are important and how you plan to communicate it visually.

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