- overal looking good. - VFX page could specifically call out what these references relate to. - the oh shit moment wording feels a bit at odds with how the weapon is described being more as a way to escape hoards of enemies to just fight 1 on 1 - potentially reword this section a bit or reframe your fantasy fulfillment being more about allowing you to 'take your time' with a chosen enemy rather than running away from groups of enemies (feels less empowering). Timeline seems ok - all 3d in one week with renders seems... aggressive - you may want to leave more time for this potentially.
Hey Thomas,
ReplyDeleteHere's my initial thoughts on your pitch!
- overal looking good.
- VFX page could specifically call out what these references relate to.
- the oh shit moment wording feels a bit at odds with how the weapon is described being more as a way to escape hoards of enemies to just fight 1 on 1 - potentially reword this section a bit or reframe your fantasy fulfillment being more about allowing you to 'take your time' with a chosen enemy rather than running away from groups of enemies (feels less empowering).
Timeline seems ok - all 3d in one week with renders seems... aggressive - you may want to leave more time for this potentially.