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Hey Simon,
Hey Simon,
Good work on this! For the flow lines I think you've generally got the idea - I've done a quick paintover to simplify some of the general flow shapes - Some of the curves you'll want to ignore and more try to search out/feel through some of the continued implied connections (like the base of the rubber grips on the handle and how various parts echo other forms). This stuff is of course all a matter of opinion for flow lines though so its definitely open to interpretation on more complex objects like this.
The mind map looks good too - you could possibly go a layer deeper with some of these possibly pointing out detailing or extra features that draw attention to some of these things (buttons being red for clarity/maybe inherent association with danger?) grips made of rubber material with textured surface to prevent slipping and easy identification from other materials etc. Overal good work though. I also like the inclusion of the extra form breakdown, well done!
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