First off make sure you add the appropriate tags to your post otherwise i'll have a hard time bringing up your posts when grading time comes! Ok onto actual feedback:
Mind map looks great - very detailed and thorough. The flow breakdown is getting a little busy with too many contradicting and over laping forms making it hard to understand where the flow is coming from. Try to look for shapes that echo each other and emphasize the a sense of direction in a design. We'll talk more about this in class with this weeks subject.
The sketches are looking good! lots of weird interesting forms. Some might feel a bit deathtrap like or overly fragile but still quite interesting!
Hey Raul,
ReplyDeleteFirst off make sure you add the appropriate tags to your post otherwise i'll have a hard time bringing up your posts when grading time comes! Ok onto actual feedback:
Mind map looks great - very detailed and thorough. The flow breakdown is getting a little busy with too many contradicting and over laping forms making it hard to understand where the flow is coming from. Try to look for shapes that echo each other and emphasize the a sense of direction in a design. We'll talk more about this in class with this weeks subject.
The sketches are looking good! lots of weird interesting forms. Some might feel a bit deathtrap like or overly fragile but still quite interesting!