Not bad on these - 5 is probably the most successful of these so far balancing filling the space and cutting into it - it could use a little horizontal breakup though as its relatively flat in that regard (front and back). Some of the other designs like 1 and 4 leave too much of the blockout space unfilled. 2 and 3 seem like possibilities for these though 2 will need some further work to push it beyond the simple geometric shapes stage and 3 could use some more interesting form breakup on the deck of the ship maybe. Carry on!
Hey Serene,
ReplyDeleteNot bad on these - 5 is probably the most successful of these so far balancing filling the space and cutting into it - it could use a little horizontal breakup though as its relatively flat in that regard (front and back). Some of the other designs like 1 and 4 leave too much of the blockout space unfilled. 2 and 3 seem like possibilities for these though 2 will need some further work to push it beyond the simple geometric shapes stage and 3 could use some more interesting form breakup on the deck of the ship maybe. Carry on!