These are looking pretty good and I think you're hitting the right direction in 10,11 and 12 where you've got some good asymmetry happening along with some interesting combination of forms, negative space and massing. feel free to push outside the dimensions of the blockout a bit or not go right to the edges to create more exagerated/dynamic shapes as most of the designs are feeling a bit blocky still as though they're perfectly filling the base form too closely.
Hi Will,
ReplyDeleteThese are looking pretty good and I think you're hitting the right direction in 10,11 and 12 where you've got some good asymmetry happening along with some interesting combination of forms, negative space and massing. feel free to push outside the dimensions of the blockout a bit or not go right to the edges to create more exagerated/dynamic shapes as most of the designs are feeling a bit blocky still as though they're perfectly filling the base form too closely.