These are looking pretty neat - I definitely like the ones that have some more asymmetry in this collection. Ones like on the 1st one on the 3rd row of page 2 (this is why you number!) i would avoid where there are too many angles happening in it giving the device the feeling of falling over. Also #3 on page 1 - be aware as to how forms converge with each other - this is leaning a bit towards some maschinen krieger style of work (which is fine) where shapes are more organic but you'll need to think carefully about how they converge and interact with each other as that style has a very particular look.
Hey Thomas,
ReplyDeleteThese are looking pretty neat - I definitely like the ones that have some more asymmetry in this collection. Ones like on the 1st one on the 3rd row of page 2 (this is why you number!) i would avoid where there are too many angles happening in it giving the device the feeling of falling over. Also #3 on page 1 - be aware as to how forms converge with each other - this is leaning a bit towards some maschinen krieger style of work (which is fine) where shapes are more organic but you'll need to think carefully about how they converge and interact with each other as that style has a very particular look.