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Hey Bettina,
The mind map could use some further work I think including the product goals and materials. The left side of the mind map could definitely use a bit more expanding. The right side is well done with some having a couple layers of depth breakdown. Good job on this section.
Good work on the flow images Bettina, there's a lot of interlocking shapes happening on this so its a bit hard to break it down. Here's a quick draw over where I'm focusing on trying to seek out the shapes that echo one another throughout the design:
UPDATE: much better Bettina! Map looks great and the updated flow is much improved! thanks!
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