These are looking great! Some of the shapes in the antique phone/radio are feeling a bit odd to me - mostly the downward angling of the large left side top piece and how the top right cylinder is converging into the main mass. Try to avoid having the edge of that circle pinch the surface - this would be a good example of thinking about how this form can be framed or converge with another. If this unclear just let me know here and i'll do a quick paintover!
Hi Jessie,
ReplyDeleteThese are looking great! Some of the shapes in the antique phone/radio are feeling a bit odd to me - mostly the downward angling of the large left side top piece and how the top right cylinder is converging into the main mass. Try to avoid having the edge of that circle pinch the surface - this would be a good example of thinking about how this form can be framed or converge with another. If this unclear just let me know here and i'll do a quick paintover!
Ah I see the problems now, and I will avoid tangents as I clean it up. Thank you!
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